What was the first version of In the Presence of the King Like?

Asaph, Cal-Lin and another friend (not named Li-Geming yet) actually lived in the capital. They were either orphans or just runaway but that felt too cliche and over done. And because they were in the capital they actually get into the King’s castle somehow. I didn’t finish this version, so it never became an official first draft.


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